3||0|126|0| 0|0|0|||||Notes for Secant Angles in a Circle|Bill Malloy|1|07:07:51|03/23/2007|The opening paragrapph includesthe phrase%3A%0D%0A%0D%0AConventionally%2C the secant angle equals half the sum ...%0D%0A%0D%0AThe equality isn%27t conventional%2C it is actual. I think the sentence would be more correct without the opening adverb. There may be another adverb that would be OK here.%0D%0A%0D%0AThe next sentence%2C the first comma %28after case%29 doesn%27%3Bt really belong there.%0D%0A%0D%0AJust below the figure%2C %0D%0A%0D%0AThis creates a triangle ACD with and external angle BDC.%0D%0A%0D%0Ashould be %0D%0A%0D%0AThis creates a triangle ACD with an external angle BDC%2C%22 1|1|0|||||RE%3A Notes for Secant Angles in a Circle|alexb||07:11:27|03/24/2007|Thank you for taking the time.%0D%0A%0D%0A%3EThe equality isn%27t conventional%2C it is actual. %0D%0A%0D%0AYou are right.%0D%0A%0D%0A%3EThe next sentence%2C the first comma %28after case%29 doesn%27%3Bt %0D%0A%3Ereally belong there. %0D%0A%0D%0AUsually a tangent is not called a secant. Thus I believe what was said previously does not automatically extend to the case of a tangent and a secant. Thought it is reasonable to give the case a special mention.%0D%0A%0D%0A%3Eshould be %0D%0A%3EThis creates a triangle ACD with an external angle BDC%2C%22 %0D%0A%0D%0AYes. Thank you again.%0D%0A%0D%0AAlex%0D%0A 2|2|1|||||RE%3A Notes for Secant Angles in a Circle|Bill Malloy|1|20:03:07|03/24/2007|I%27m not saying the tangent case doesn%27t deserve special mention%2C I%27m just saying the sentence flows more naturally without the first comma. The comma between %22circle%22 and %22A%22 is the first place I want to pause when reading the sentence.%0D%0A%0D%0ABill 3|3|2|||||RE%3A Notes for Secant Angles in a Circle|alexb||20:07:33|03/24/2007|%3EI%27m just saying the sentence flows more naturally %0D%0A%3Ewithout the first comma. The comma between %22circle%22 and %22A%22 %0D%0A%3Eis the first place I want to pause when reading the %0D%0A%3Esentence. %0D%0A%0D%0AYes%2C of course. Thank you for your perseverance.%0D%0A